Below is a video example from the original version of Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. This is how Shakespeare intended for it to be seen.
Watch the fight scene starting at 1:24 seconds.
Below is Baz Luhrmann's interpretation of this scene. He's changed it to a more modern setting but kept the language the same.
Watch the fight scene starting at :34 seconds.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BrT-lPa-PVc&safe=active
Which do you like better? I"m guessing the second one.
This is what I'd like you to do with your scene. Read through the lines and change them to how you think they would be said today. In order to do this you must understand what is happening in your scene. You may want to read through the whole thing first so you know what's happening.
Once you are finished think about what type of setting you might see this scene happening in today?
How would the relationships be portrayed?

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